Hi Mana, I really like the way you've made this speech to encourage others to Practise, Peaceful Play. Maybe next time you can check your work and put some full stops and capital letters in there. Also make sure it make sense. Keep up the great work.
Kia Ora, Mana...you have shared some really important information about Practicing Peaceful Play. I really liked the way you gave some specific advice to the reader. Keep practicing your full stops and capital letters! And another challenge for you could be to organise your ideas into paragraphs. I look forward to seeing more writing from you!!!!!!
Hi Mana, I really like the way you've made this speech to encourage others to Practise, Peaceful Play. Maybe next time you can check your work and put some full stops and capital letters in there. Also make sure it make sense. Keep up the great work.
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you are trying to encourage other to become more like you.
Keep it up!
Kia Ora, Mana...you have shared some really important information about Practicing Peaceful Play. I really liked the way you gave some specific advice to the reader. Keep practicing your full stops and capital letters! And another challenge for you could be to organise your ideas into paragraphs. I look forward to seeing more writing from you!!!!!!
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