Friday 22 May 2015

Title: Anubis anubis is a god of the underworld. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Mana.

    Seriously, if you do read this comment here, giving you some FEEDBACK, is that you seriously need a title, mate. Almost every blogpost I see in your archive has the title...Title: and then your post. Add a title, please.

    Nice information about Anubis. Maybe, a bit more information, maybe about the history, the story behind the God of the Underworld, some decoration to your DLO.

    But other than that...yeah, maybe a title overall.

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  2. Hello Mana, I like how you have explained what your topic is and what you did in this activity. Maybe next time you should fix some mistakes and add some punctuation.

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