Thursday 16 April 2015

hello my name is mana and over the  holidays i have been gaining out with my family i've  been going out very like where i went was rainbows end, go karting, paintballing, rotura, dirtbiking, i had lots of fun over my holidays and i hope my family had fun to thanks to my mum and dad for taking to do cool stuff like this.
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  1. Anonymous18 April 2015 at 15:30

    Short and sweet...short and sweet...

    Sweet post. Nice to see a bit of blogging during the school holidays. Just maaybe next time, for good reasoning...a title...

    -Willy

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    1. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 14:32

      I agree Willy,
      Short and sweet.I like the way you Mana stated who you went with and what you did may maybe next time you could work on coming up with a title for your post and also fixing up your punctuation! Besides that well done.

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  2. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 14:50

    I agree with you too Willy,

    Short & Sweet. Mana I like the way you said who you went with where use went. Next time you could work on adding a title and labels to your work and also fixing up your punctuation! But any ways well done Mana.

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